Well all of you know that I've been writing a story ,but I just can't figure out how to write this page I'm on.I have told you people this because I would like to ask you for your help to finish this page ,or to help me get past this part.I could end it right were it is ,but I want stuff to happen on the way back to the inn.It does not have to be fighting it could be Sara asking questions were he was,what he was doing,and how he killed the thug and not remember.Maybe it could be Gort asking Sara what she was doing ,or maybe what Kane and her brothers were talking about.These aren't the only options ,so you can make up one and comment but remember there is no guns or plasma cannons.Just swords lances and all weapons like that but for clothes
you can use today dress.Jeans t-shirt stuff like that.
Gort was still rocking Sara back and forth in the alley.In the midst of all the old broken furniture lay the thug that would never harm anyone again.Gort just couldn't figure out how he could of caused all this destruction by himself,and he couldn't remember a thing right after the thug knocked Sara out.
Gort: How did I do this?Why can't I remember?
Sara: Uhhh...Wha-what happened?
Gort: Sara?Oh,Sara thank goodness your all right!
Sara: Ouch,my head hurts like it got ran over by a herd of cattle!
Gort: You will be fine just don't stand up real fast.
As Sara started to get up she notice all of the broken furniture and the dead body in the midst of it.It had gashes all over and its clothes were all torn.She walked over to examine the body further only to find out that she couldn't stand the sight of the mangled body.
Sara: Gort,did you this?
Gort: I think so,but this is no time to discuss this.Lets get you home!
They left the alley and was on they're way back walking on the muddy streets.
Tuesday, August 7, 2007
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Lol... Gort sounds a little bit like Jason Bourne right there... Lol... I think that maybe she should ask him how he didn't remember, and then Gort has a flashback from his past about something... but hey... I'm just a poor person trying to make his way in the world... lol
Dude... that is totally wack... I commented on this yesterday and it still says "0 Comments"... What's the deal?
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